The detail the you have gone to, to describe your idea is really good and you have it planned to the very last detail which is fantastic. I like your plot idea and I think it is really captivating aswell!
Did you have any idea inspirations or foundations that you based your idea upon? Well done!!!!
Firstly, I like the name of your thriller. The direct address of the title is very mysterious and makes me or the audience, interested in finding out what it is about. I also like your inclusion of Todorov's theory to show that you have researched your plot. Finally I think that it's good that Ben is homosexual because it again adds more depth and shows contrast between the characters. My only minor suggestion would be to include some of your images from pinterest on your Prezi and explain them but otherwise very well thought out.
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The detail the you have gone to, to describe your idea is really good and you have it planned to the very last detail which is fantastic. I like your plot idea and I think it is really captivating aswell!
ReplyDeleteDid you have any idea inspirations or foundations that you based your idea upon?
Well done!!!!
Firstly, I like the name of your thriller. The direct address of the title is very mysterious and makes me or the audience, interested in finding out what it is about. I also like your inclusion of Todorov's theory to show that you have researched your plot. Finally I think that it's good that Ben is homosexual because it again adds more depth and shows contrast between the characters.
ReplyDeleteMy only minor suggestion would be to include some of your images from pinterest on your Prezi and explain them but otherwise very well thought out.