The use of specific and detailed examples was excellent, because you gave an for every point you made. You talked about the negative and positive representations of teenagers and named various different stereotypes. It was also really good how you talked about not just one but loads of affects of the media. To improve you could maybe go more into depth in the analysis to try and talk about why teenagers are represented in this way.
I like the fluidity of the presentation, how each point links into the next is very effective. I also think the detail about body image is very good as I think that is a key aspect of being a teenager. Furthermore the primary searches of 'ugly' and 'attractive' teenagers again highlights the depth you have gone into about the representation of teenagers. To improve this presentation, maybe include a more detailed explanation of some the initial images but otherwise a very detailed, valid presentation, well done.
Really fascinating presentation. I liked the fact that you included a wide range of examples and evidence to back up your points. You have clearly done thorough research and have shown really good understanding of how the media represent both teen genders. Maybe a slight impovement would be to go into a little bit more detail to try and explain, why teenagers are represented as they are, in some the ways that you've explained. Overall a really good and planned presentation
Excellent example of what I am expecting from you Sophia, very clean, strong, informative with strong use of relevant and pertinent terms. Great graphics and a very good use of Prezi. MAGIC!
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The use of specific and detailed examples was excellent, because you gave an for every point you made. You talked about the negative and positive representations of teenagers and named various different stereotypes. It was also really good how you talked about not just one but loads of affects of the media.
ReplyDeleteTo improve you could maybe go more into depth in the analysis to try and talk about why teenagers are represented in this way.
But it was a really good presentation!
I like the fluidity of the presentation, how each point links into the next is very effective. I also think the detail about body image is very good as I think that is a key aspect of being a teenager. Furthermore the primary searches of 'ugly' and 'attractive' teenagers again highlights the depth you have gone into about the representation of teenagers.
ReplyDeleteTo improve this presentation, maybe include a more detailed explanation of some the initial images but otherwise a very detailed, valid presentation, well done.
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ReplyDeleteReally fascinating presentation. I liked the fact that you included a wide range of examples and evidence to back up your points. You have clearly done thorough research and have shown really good understanding of how the media represent both teen genders. Maybe a slight impovement would be to go into a little bit more detail to try and explain, why teenagers are represented as they are, in some the ways that you've explained. Overall a really good and planned presentation
ReplyDeleteExcellent example of what I am expecting from you Sophia, very clean, strong, informative with strong use of relevant and pertinent terms. Great graphics and a very good use of Prezi. MAGIC!
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